Saturday, September 19, 2009

Naisaiku:: Home Still Beckons Me

** writing a Naisaiku after a long time... well dnt know if there was a topic or something... this time just writing what I felt like :)

Rain soaked feet and paper boats
tiny puddles of joy
blossoms whisper lonely songs
HOME STILL BECKONS ME
blossoms whisper lonely songs
tiny puddles of joy
Rain soaked feet and paper boats

for more check here : The Naisaiku Challenge

9 comments:

  1. That was a really beautiful NaiSaiku!

    A great read!

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  2. Interesting..
    WIll have to check wt exactly NaiSaiku is..

    :)

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  3. Well done on this one - look forward to seeing more of you.

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  4. Beautifully done! thanks for posting this, and I'm so sorry that I haven't been around this week.
    -Andy Sewina

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