Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Surrender {Trinet}


Surrender


Rising  horizon
Mellowed milieu
Sedate breeze, whispering tales, bygone days
Morning  rays  drape ,  iciness inside  ,  still
Lonliness pursue
Silently  trickles
Solitary      tear


Distant    clouds
Convoluted tricks
Crafting cottony crystal eyes,azure smile
Then floats away, farther,towards infinity
Leaving    behind
Shadowed dreams
Deafening silence


Glimmering moonlight
Sparkling      stardust
Remind moments ,lost in time , forever
Like shimmering dewdrop,confined in heart
Till    eternity
Torturing pain
I    surrender

**The Trinet, created by zion, is a form with these specifications:

Line 1 - 2 words
Line 2 - 2 words
Line 3 - 6 words
Line 4 - 6 words
Line 5 - 2 words
Line 6 - 2 words
Line 7 - 2 words

Repeat this pattern 2 more times, if centered correctly it looks like three crosses.

1 comment:

  1. Didnt quite understand first..aparama...wow yu managed the residue neatly indeed :D ...yes foggy answers..sry for not being at yur space regularly :(

    HaRy

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