Sunday, January 31, 2010

Untitled – Why should all poems be titled?? This poem does not conform to usual standards…!!

Sree had tagged me long time back for this meme... Just a thread of random thoughts :)

Simple rules to this meme:
>The TITLE of the post should be the same as above!!!
> The tags should include poem-with-no-title
> The poem should preferably be just random thoughts and abstract-ish

Here's mine :



Surged the darkest waves
below violet firmament,
flashed streaks of fire
danced a fallen star.
Icicles formed, wintery cold,
and leaned on the window,
chapped faith awaits
a summer afternoon,
curled in creepy shadows,
the Isle of my dreams.


Icy solitude shattered,
when dawned a silver cloud,
scattering amber rays,
upon molten sand,
golden grains of time.


Smiled, the isle of my dreams.


I am not tagging anyone. Whoever wishes can take this meme forward

4 comments:

  1. "the isle of my dreams."

    perfect end to the poem...in a way its suitable as title

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  2. Awesome Princess...thanks for picking up the tag!! :D

    Didnt know another poetic blog space existed!!! :)

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  3. @Sankoobaba

    ya thats what I named it though :D

    @Sree
    welcome ... do visit this one too :D

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  4. yeppaaa.. ena ma english ithu....very nice...!

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