Friday, February 26, 2010

::Whispering Memories::



Whispering moments
of timeless love
surge in my heart,

obsolete promises wander,
abandoned by
capricious words,

Acidic memories,
drenched me again
last night,

Why still stands,
solitary lighthouse
of ethereal Rhapsody?

Forever waiting
to guide,
you to me.

 
I wrote this for an image contest -  a challenge where a poem had to be written based on the image provided. I am glad to say that my write was the winner for this image ~Smiles~

9 comments:

  1. ooeeeee....naya id :|
    kya baat hai princess :D
    lovely poem yaar.... super super
    jahaanpanaah tussi great ho ...!!!!

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  2. congrats! and rightfully so, beautiful

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  3. yeah..this is a really nice picture interpretation..congratz~!!

    (P.S. if you'll reply to this comment..pls. put it in my blog's comment box so that i can update my comments :D)

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  4. beautiful pic
    with beautiful poem

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  5. nice one...i think capturing a sentiment in few lines is truly an art.

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  6. @Megz
    arey ye pehle bhi tah... but not updated...
    thanks a lot :D

    @Kay
    thanks a lot :D

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  7. @ayu
    thanks a lot :D

    @sm
    thank you so much :D

    @Gyanban
    thanks a lot :D

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  8. you have talent young lady...must read you daily

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  9. I am not surprised that you won the contest, because it truly compliments the picture. The light house is in the foreground while the couple stay a little murky and hazy sort of showing to the world that the beacon can still lead the path to the glory of past days. Really nice. A pleasure to read this one.

    -Vittal

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