Thursday, March 4, 2010

::Forever was never mine::




Twirling golden autumn leaf
reminds once again
Forever was never mine.
reminds once again
Twirling golden autumn leaf


Written for NaiSaiKu Challenge ... Its never too late to write one :)

13 comments:

  1. Hiya, so nice to see you taking The NaiSaiKu Challenge once again. 'Forever was never mine' is quite a deep thought, and I like the way you associated that with the golden autumn leaf.

    Nicely!!

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  2. that was exciting, imagery packed and well written, I love this blog :)

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  3. Great metaphor in that falling leaf.

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  4. A golden autumn leaf twirling down -- wilted and fragile. This makes you aware of a truth that forever is never yours. That's a nice image you have created.

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  5. Very nice! 'Forever was never mine' is a particularly strong phrase!

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  6. Liked your blog.Its refreshing and lively area.

    Take Care
    Vikas{V}

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  7. short and yes as always yu rock !! crisp ah impact panalam na mudiyalae namalala!

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  8. a special award for you xxx

    http://williamm49.blogspot.com/2010/03/blogtastic-award-special-friends.html

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  9. thank you so much everyone for the encouraging comments :)

    @william
    thank you so much for the award :)

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  10. round and round it goes... beautiful.

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