Tuesday, March 9, 2010

::Memory Lane::

::Memory Lane::



Tiny puddles
paper boats
laughter echoed, drenched by evening drizzles
warm blankets, delicacies, candy laced fingers
chasing rainbow
trapped       in
soap    bubbles
 


Bruised   knees
ruffled   tresses
watched butterflies flying by,and wondered
if   it  envied    my   childish    carefreeness
distant     images
slowly      flicker
rusted memories



long   forgotten
summer dreams
shimmering from memory lane, beckons me
reverberates ,  chorus  of  nostalgic  songs
past   -   present
slowly gravitates
invincible    time.



Form - Trinet
The Trinet, created by zion, is a form with these specifications:
Line 1 - 2 words
Line 2 - 2 words
Line 3 - 6 words
Line 4 - 6 words
Line 5 - 2 words
Line 6 - 2 words
Line 7 - 2 words
Repeat this pattern 2 more times, if centered correctly it looks like three crosses.

7 comments:

  1. this was very clever, im unable tow rite many forms of poetry and I admire people like you who can, I applaud u , bravo xx

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  2. wow..this is fantastic~! its the first time ive read something like this!!

    you're really good :)

    visit my blog if you have time

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  3. @william
    thank you so much :)
    I am so glad you liked it :)

    @Ayu
    will definately visit :)
    thanks a lot :)

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  4. Woww :) :) Excellent Write Up!!!!!!!

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  5. awesome yaar..
    this "trinet thing"
    and esp. "carefreeness" really liked it..

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  6. @creativity
    @Sankoobaba

    thank you so much :D

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  7. Very nice. Memories are so precious. A very pleasant post.

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