Tuesday, March 30, 2010

::The Unknown::

The Unknown



Psychedelic dreams haunt
damp corridors of
unknown.

I am broke, repaying interest
of smiles, borrowed
from destiny.

Reflections claw
solitute -
my only solace.

 
"Once upon a time" ended abruply.
Heart became the Unknown,
when? I don't remember.

10 comments:

  1. whooaaa...!!! brilliant..
    lovely verses.. :D
    kaise karti ho princess...thoda apna ashirwad muje bhi dedo :P

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  2. Raj this was beautiful, best poem I have read today by a long chalk xxx

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  3. good poem
    esp.

    "Reflections claw
    solitute -
    my only solace."

    perfectly embodies the title without being obvious

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  4. Oh my what a poem, I have chills and somehow I feel lucky to be one of the people reading this!

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  5. hi

    dont use the word Psychedelic too much ;-)

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  6. Never knew u hd a poetry blog too :P
    Nice one :)

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  7. wow~~ i was blown away!! this one is good!


    P.S.
    check out my latest post~ :D

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  8. Wow! This is fantastic
    Brilliant work...
    :)

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  9. Superb. The structure is excellent. The points about repaying interest of smiles and being broke, and solitude being the only solace are so heart rending. Wow! I am touched.

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