Friday, April 2, 2010

::Thursday Poet's Rally:: Dawn to dusk




Dawn to Dusk (Minute Poetry)



Crowing bird greeting the first rays
Azure display
Shimmering dew
Swaying bamboo



Scorching sun crowning midnoon blue
Dusty milieu
Summer heat
Sizzling treat



Orange billows bedeck horizon
Rich creation
Silky moonlight
Enchanting sight.





Written on : 2008-05-23






**The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff.

**I will be on vaccation for the next two weeks with limited internet access. Will catch up with your blogs once I come back :)






12 comments:

  1. do you have PHD in poetry..
    just asking..coz i have never seen so many "types" of poetry..makes my poetry collection look like a nimbu-paani with no "paani"

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  2. have fun oat your vacation!
    cool poem for a cool poet!
    See you back then!
    cheers,
    ;)

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  3. Woww!!!!!!! Beautiful Write Up :) :) Enjoy Your Vacation :) :)

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  4. wow, so nicely done in beauty and technique...

    have a wonderful vacation!

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  5. Raj u never fail to come across with the goods, how clever was this, and perfect in every way xx

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  6. your poems are really awesome~!!! :D be sure you enjoy your vacation ok..? :P

    P.S.
    if you're ain't busy, pls. check out my latest post :D

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  7. Beautifully written. :)
    I liked line 'Silky moonlight' the most.

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  8. This is indeed a very nicely crafted poem. What amazes me most about your poems is the structure. No matter which meter you choose it always has a good structure and the message comes out just as you liked it to display itself. Cheers!

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  9. Not just from dawn to dusk, but from down to dusk with sizzling heat, bamboo, and silky moonlight. A rich landscape for a poem.

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  10. yu shud be going pro... seriously! ana yenaku puriyarathukey late aguthu

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  11. Really cool poem :)
    Beautifully written!

    Marinela x

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  12. So nice poem,you'll surely succeess to write poem if not success yet.i m frm brindavan,u.p

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