Thursday, April 22, 2010

[Thursday Poet's Rally Week 15]::Conspiracies of Time::

Here's my Poem for jingle's Thursday Poet's Rally week 15.

Conspiracies Of time



A breeze of remembrance
ruffled distance memories
whispering soliloquies,
flickered imageries.
Beneath silky moonlight,
twirling to silver notes,
surging in passionate tide
waltzing in our dream-boats.

Since then, years have passed,
but love you, and miss you still,
wonder, how you would look now,
fishing near your favorite rill.
Daffodils- no longer flourish,
Seasons perform discord rhyme,
Tumbling leaves gently remind,
Obscure conspiracies of time.


written on : 2009-03-23


Image source: google

17 comments:

  1. wow Raj, this is awsome, your poetry always amazes me, u are beginning to be a prolific writer xx my post will be up tomorrow xx

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  2. That is a freaking awesome poem!!! If you don't mind me saying freaking?? :)

    I was very grabbed by the whole waltzing in our Dream-Boat line. And the second verse pretty-much blew me away, the way it and the sad information unfolded. Made me feel very sad. So you did your job very well!!

    So great to meet you!!

    LOVE the name of your blog -- how could one not be very intrigued by a poetry wagon. Whoo-hoo. I fell off the poetry wagon. :)

    :)
    xo

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  3. off shore writersApril 22, 2010 at 6:50 AM

    This piece transcends time and space. Thanks for sharing

    Best regards,
    Viny

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  4. Rajlakshmi...you're poem is amazing. The words you chose, the poem's structure. Your soul perspires through it. Even though the poem may be a bit sad, your love of life reflects and speaks from it as well. Really nice.

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  5. superb verse...the words themselves were rather a waltz...and the memories take me back...

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  6. excellent poem .

    yeah like brian said.. a waltz!

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  7. Very nice piece and the picture really works well. Great job.

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  8. this one was beautifuly writen!!inspiring!!..words woven perfectly!!

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  9. very nice..soothing to the lips when reading it :)

    (ps. check out my latest post if you have time,,.thanks :3)

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  10. Very well done,Raj.
    Happy Thursday!
    Mine is here
    hugs
    shakira

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  11. I am speechless! This is great!

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  12. This is beatiful. I really love the last two lines...says it all.

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  13. just amazing,the words you have chosen and the underline meaning of them just give life to ur poetry.

    keep rocking,
    PN

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  14. Iv just got to say very humbly it sounded good real good, but some places i couldnt get you. What about my effort. Any comments
    http://majorsrikanth.blogspot.com/2008/02/haikku-my-style.html on this

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  15. One word; LOVELY.....Thanks for stopping by @ my blog, that was so kind of you.

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  16. This is great for conspiracies.

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  17. some people stay forever in heart.

    wonderfully written raj.

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