Friday, May 28, 2010

Thursday Poet's Rally :: A Dream Sleeps::

A Dream Sleeps



Under wreaths of heaven blue
a dream sleeps in whisper,
on canvas of melancholia.
Crashing against the coarse shore,
thousand hues of horizon
diffuse into timeless wait,

A moon-dust sprinkled silhouette
walks along pragmatic corridors
towards eternal solitude,

...and beyond.

Miscarriaged Chimera.

 
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Was nominated for Perfect Poet award Week 19 by Megz at Jingle's Thursday Poet's Rally
 
 

Creativity
unfolds here, funny bites too
Enjoy Poet's Rally

I would like to nominate Jingle ... for writing lovely poems and taking so much effort to make this rally a success :)
 
 

18 comments:

  1. very compact poem!
    powerful words!
    Thank you for the nomination and acceptance of the award.
    Have fun!
    ;)

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  2. Under wreaths of heaven blue
    a dream sleeps in whisper,
    on canvas of melancholia.
    What an incredible image!

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  3. I am checking on who you nominate,
    find out is is me...
    thank you for the kind intention.
    Cheers!

    visit poets to get more feedback..

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  4. diffuse to timeless wait --- wonderful image of a sleeping dream - thank you for sharing this image.....bkm

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  5. What a visually provocative poem this is! I love: moon-dust sprinkled silhouette. Well done!

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  6. you closing words dropped the floor out from beneath me...powerful stuff today...

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  7. amazing, best read of the day, u are superb, congrqats on ur award xxx

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  8. Beautiful poem evoking a sense of wonder and desolation. Enjoyed very much. Thanks

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  9. Lovely flow of words1
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  10. A really nice command of the English language you string together words in a magical way.

    Came by jingle today,
    Joanny

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  11. Very nice.

    Thanks for sharing. I hope you will visit my sites:

    Tim Keeton - A Writer's Tale

    and

    The Undead Poets Society

    Rhyme on!

    Tim Keeton
    (Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
    A Week 19 Perfect Poet Award Winner

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  12. 'thousand hues of horizon
    diffuse into timeless wait'

    This is my favourite part. Very impressive

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  13. Oh my! this is so powerful!
    Loved this part
    "A moon-dust sprinkled silhouette
    walks along pragmatic corridors
    towards eternal solitude"

    Wonderful! keep writing!

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  14. What a gorgeous poem and wonderfull nomination.

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  17. a dream sleeps in whisper! wonderful usage.
    lovely poem too!

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