Friday, May 7, 2010

::Thursday Poets Rally Week 17:: Toadie, the Toad

Tried to write something different just for fun ...
For Jingle's Thursday Poet's Rally Week 17

{Don't throw stones at me after reading this :D}



Toadie, the toad planed to woo,
Lovely Froggie of Lake Mishoo,
with Mushroom cap and grassy shoe,
and lessons to change, croak to coo.

Next morn, he jumped with glee,
gizmo watch and weed-stripped tee
gathering petals from Miss Lily,
strutting towards his destiny,

flick of tongue, click of heel
her doe-eyes, many hearts it grilled
watching her dressed in purple peel
Todie's pulse went off the reel,

gaining courage blurred Toadie,
Oh lovely, Will you love me ?
battering eyelids smiled froggie
"waiting only for you Dearie "




 

35 comments:

  1. fun poem,
    love the cute frog!

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  2. very cute-- I can see the illustrations for the children's book!
    http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/

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  3. this was a great post Raj, fun makes the heart grow, and u certianly do that everytime you post xxx

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  4. aaww....chooooo cuuuttteee... :)
    heehehehe... and the pics are so sweeettt...
    ekdum dhinchak princess :D

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  5. I really liked reading this poem! It was a fun read!

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  6. aww cute! I should rad this to my kids. They would like it. Fun read.

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  7. i am not a big fan of toads and frogs... but your poem is so cute and endearing.. :)

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  8. haha...this is soo sweet ...good good ... keep up the good workk!

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  9. aww..so cute :)

    (p.s. check out my latest post if you have time,,.thanks :3)

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  10. this was absolutely hilarious :)

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  11. Very nice Rajlakshmi :)
    Loved it!!

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  12. A poem about toad?...thats creative...nice one...cheers!!!

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  13. Made me smile right when I really needed to :)
    Loved it. The picture is cute too!

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  14. @Chandana
    @Jingle
    @Brian
    thank you so much :)

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  15. @suzicate
    heheh ya just wanted to do something silly for a change :)
    thank you so much :)

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  16. @mairmusic
    @william
    thank you so much :D

    @mudwords
    @Sankoobaba
    thanks a lot :D

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  17. @megz
    hehehe thank you re :D

    @poetryofthe asian
    thanks a lot for liking it :)

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  18. @kkrige
    hehehe thanks a lot :D

    @isha
    lolzzz atleast you liked this one :D
    thanks a lot :D

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  19. @suryagni
    @Shortpoems
    @CB
    thank you so much :)

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  20. @lordmmanuel
    thank you so much for liking it :)

    @lonelydreamer
    thanks a lot :D
    really glad :)

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  21. next post please- waiting :)

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  22. next post please- waiting :)

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  23. i loved the pictures, both of them. :)

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  24. what a cute poem..and the name of the toad too :)

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  25. aaahh it was sooooo sweeettttttt :D

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  26. ROFL...so where is this Mishoo?? Can i find the froggie?? ya woh bhi committed? :O

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  27. Your poem is very cute! I love the picture that goes with it. You have a truly flavoursome blog.
    Thank you so much for visiting and leaving a comment on my blog. Your thoughts are appreciated. :)
    Happy Spring.

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