Thursday, May 20, 2010

Thursday Poet's Rally Week 19::Dying Nation::

Here's my Entry for Jingle's Thursday Poet's Rally week 19 ... I wrote this long time back :)


Dying Nation

 
Anguished, frustrated
Cowering Inside,
Trapped in cobweb
Nation's life.

Disentangle, escape
Tightening grip,
Handcuffed by
Society's whip.

Hypocrats, Scandals
Stymieing progress,
Repressed opinion
Honesty undressed.

Bomb-Blast, massacres
Breaking events,
Delighted vultures
Hunger content.

I would also like to accept the following poetry awards for participating in Week 18 ... thank you so much Jingle :)
The Most Intelligent Poet Award


The Most Open Minded Poet Award


The Most honest Poet award

15 comments:

  1. I feel the power of your words.
    beautiful poem,
    reflective message!

    thanks for playing!
    Have fun!

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  2. very powerful, provoking. One need only look around, read anewspaper, turn on the tv or radio. What is happening? And what can we do about it?

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  3. ye sab apne hi country mein hota hai :(
    mastttt poem :)

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  4. I agree with Ji powerful indeed, your poetry is a marvel and I am lucky to have u as a friend xx

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  5. they have all said it & i agree, very powerful

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  6. Rajlakshmi you have a very nice blog. I have read several of your poems and they are all outstanding. Thank you so much for stopping by William's public blog to read my poem A Dream. I am happy that you like it.

    Viola

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  7. "Trapped in cobweb" & "Handcuffed by /
    Society's whip" Incredible imagery in your poetic flow and sincere message.
    Thanks

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  8. Adorable! Amazing poetry Raj, and very touching

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  9. kya kavita likha hai, aisa laga kee mere dil kee bat aapne likh dee.

    shukriya :)

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  10. a very honest and powerful piece.

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  11. poem to describe what happens in india.. good one

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  12. wow. a fast moving hard hitting poem...i like it...nicely done.

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  13. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/13/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-for-nomination/

    deadline is within 24 hours,
    please vote.

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  14. a small token xxx

    http://s5.tinypic.com/351ei46_th.jpg

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