Thursday, June 17, 2010

::Thursday Poet's Rally:: Twilight Masterpiece






Twilight Masterpiece

When midnight blue is deep, beneath starlit curtain,
slowly I unfurl, my sleepy canvas of dreams,
palette of rainbow streaks, few shades of sunset peach,
charcoal grey from shadows, borrowed gold from Daffodils.

Sprinkling crystal shimmer,on silky strands of Maize,
in firefly lit milieu, borns a masterpiece
dash of violet-azure ,copper tinge smudged across,
through radiant auburn sky, sun slowly peeping out,

Unfurling burgundy petals, jeweled with amber hues,
atop Emerald blades, pristine dew on graceful lilies,
silver wings soaring high, beyond cuddly cottony clouds,
honey laced melody reverberate - twilight lullabies.

As morning fragrance seep through, yawning summer-borne streets,
Will you halt for a while and admire my masterpiece?



27 comments:

  1. beautiful,
    love the magical image...

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  2. I linked you in,
    hope that you enjoy reading other poets...
    best wishes!

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  3. a lovely poem: nice imagery and good association of words.well done .

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  4. ayehaye... aisa likhogi tho yaar mereko tho complex hi aa jayega :(
    brilliant poem princess...and kyaa pic hai...ossum :D

    keep rocking madamoiselle :D

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  5. Yo! That was lovely Raji girl! :) :)

    btw... never knew u had a new blog by this name :)

    the theme and layout are simply superb!

    Cheers

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  6. who could refuse! The words are so captivating! Nice writing!

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  7. simply mind-blowing!!!!!!

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    all the best.

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  8. Beautiful! I love all the colors!

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  9. Sure, always have time for a colorful masterpiece :)
    Excellent descriptions in bold lines. Enjoyed how you also express variations of light through appreciative tones (and hues).

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  10. you paint such a beautiful picture with your words...yes...i would..

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  11. Awesome color imagery!
    Both the poem and the picture are colorful...

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  12. such dreamy imagery:]
    yes, i would notice.

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  13. awe great post raj. loved the image, very nice, happy friday :)

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  14. Beautiful imagery! wonderful poem,

    Yes I would it is like a rain-bowed sky at sunrise.

    Joanny

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  15. beautiful Raj and the imagery are wonderful too. thank you.

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  16. Beautiful Masterpiece of dream at midnight...I enjoyed watching the canvas of ur dream before my eyes, Raj

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  17. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/19/thursday-poets-rally-week-23-poetry-awards-special-notice/

    all 5 awards for you.
    many thanks!
    ;)

    No Rally next week.

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    have a nice Monday!

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  20. I'd love to admire your masterpiece; for a masterpiece it definitely is! I esp loved the phrase "borrowed gold from daffodils".. it is something that pops out of a world of fantasy.

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  22. GAWD!!!! Beautifully chosen colored words... lovely poem!!!

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