Friday, July 2, 2010

Thursday Poet's Rally ::Still, I dream ::

Still, I dream

Seeping through white texture
myriad of sentiments blue,
hint of solitude smudged,
across canvas of grey hue.

Reaping smile from yester's lips
doodling with unfermented wish
stacked beneath a pile of
unwarranted gibberish.

But, hope crowns each rising horizon
and, still, I dream.

Wrote something after a longggg time... Have been a little busy these days so I must have been found absent from a lot of blog spaces :) but definately I will make it up :)


Was again nominated for Perfect Poet Award :D Thank you so much :D



I would like to nominate Jingle :)

24 comments:

  1. what beautiful poem,
    wow,
    you are amazing!

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  2. its cool but i somewhat couldn't get the last para, the first two paras define a dream sequence i guess...
    but why the clash between dreams and the rising sun...
    the sun brings hope but u still dream..
    a bit unclear raji!!!
    not for nothing they say, "to crack a poet's head!!" :P

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  3. Thank you for the nomination...
    As you know, I am imperfect, but with your encouragement, I try my best...
    you are dear to have!
    cheers!
    have fun visiting!

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  4. Dream on... and live EACH moment of this amazing dream to the fullest!
    Have a pleasant July...

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  5. hard to write again after a little time...i know that feeling...like this one though...keep dreaming...smiles.

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  6. Very nice. I understand how you can keep dreaming even as you begin to work again. Sun rising doesn't stop the dreaming.

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  7. You are so very creative and I loved the flow. Happy Rally Week:)

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  8. You are so very creative and I loved the flow. Happy Rally Week:)

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  9. doodling with unfermented wish -

    love that line...bkm

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  10. dear raj,
    this is why i never let go hope and dreams :)
    lots of love.

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  11. very nicely done..Keep dreaming!

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  12. Awesome yaar... really nice short poem... its b-e-a-utiful :)

    check out mine.. i need comments

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  13. Very well written dear. Loved all ur poems.

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  14. wonderful poem...:)
    http://hoiden.wordpress.com/2010/07/04/journal-entry-101/

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  15. The unbreakable nature of hope and dreams, well done. Thank you for sharing.

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  16. What a powerful ending. I'm glad I took the time to read this - it's a wonderful poem.

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  17. your poem is represented now,
    Happy Wednesday!
    ;)

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  18. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/07/08/the-celebrate-poet-of-june-award-nomination-announcement/

    time to vote again,
    please scan the links and vote, thank you in advance!

    next Rally post will be on July 21, 2010.

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  19. dream panunga nu Abdul Kalam sonathu.. bayangarama panringa pola??? nice...long time no see

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  20. http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/07/pinks-in-6-words-i-wish-u-award-winning.html

    hope that you enjoy some,
    Happy Sunday!

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  21. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/07/14/outstanding-poetry-communities-to-share/

    check out a post about poetry communities,
    have fun exploring...
    Cheers!

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