Thursday, August 26, 2010

::Superstar::

Superstar

Her nails aren't manicured and skin has lost the grace
unlike figures in glossy Mag, time had marked its pace,
but in dark lonely nights, when she embraces you tight,
subtle warmth gently reveals, beauty hidden inside.

Neither he’s the poster boy, splashed across Page 3,
With dazzling Golden boot or Mercedes SUV,
but when unknown chasm, secretively schemes ,
his strong arms will forever, fight for your dreams.

The fingers entwined, through shadowed maze,
or face of your smile, shinning behind the greys,
is an image reflected, by moments afar,
The reason of your life, the real superstars.

** Dedicated to the real superstars of my life - My Understanding Parents, Dramebaaz-Brother :P and Dahling Sister :)


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Thank you so much for nominating me...  :) and thanks Jingle for the adorable award :)

Gliding through glory
emerald hues of smiles
cherishing award

I would like to nominate the talented poet -  Kavita 

Enjoy :)

21 comments:

  1. shining piece,
    what a winner...
    thanks for the acceptance and more...
    BEST!

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  2. I love it! what a great way to put it.

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  3. eeeeeeeeeeee.......... :D
    mast likhi :D
    i feel as if i am reading a proper from you after a really long time :O
    all that i get to read are shape poems all the time :|
    not that i am complaining :D but kabhi kabhaar aise masttt poems bhi likha kar princess :D
    and congrats on the award :D

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  4. Very sensible and matured writing! Nice poem... lot of depth and thoughtful...love it!

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  5. Wow we all get here sooner or later Huh? I hope I get to this point as eloquently as your written words!

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  6. Great piece of work.. A Superstar for sure..

    Do stop by Sweetened Waters

    --Someone Is Special--

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  7. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/26/happy-birthday-2-lisa-plus-happy-belated/


    Help visit 5 to 10 poets from the list to wish them Happy (Belated) Birthday,

    take the butterfly award,
    share with 1 to 10 friends...
    :)

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  8. Fantastic poetry...thanks for sahring x

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  9. first i thought it was rajinikanth... but yep, who yu mentioned are our trueee superstars!

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  10. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/27/friendship-means-a-world-2-me/
    pick three awards from my post,
    pass them to 1 to 10 blogging friends with whom you believe that they deserve them.
    have fun!
    Take good care.

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  11. everybody has their own superstar,,
    i love d way u express ur feeling toward them,,

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  12. Now I have an award for you! http://frayedges.wordpress.com/2010/08/29/butterfly-award/
    Pass this on to 1 to 10 friends.

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  13. delightful little poem, beautiful rhyme throughout.
    I am new here; please could you take a look at blog and leave me any feed back on my Poems. I am also in the process of publishing my first Poetry novel, entitled The Jaw, due out in October. Any comments will be so grateful. Kindest regards and keep up the good work, K
    http://kashaw.wordpress.com/
    http://kashaw.wordpress.com/my-poems/

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  14. http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/welcome-to-jingle-poetry-positions-are.html

    I opened a new site,
    let me know if you are interested in a position there.
    do nothing if uninterested,

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