Thursday, September 9, 2010

Thursday Poet's Rally ::Beautiful Morn::

Beautiful Morn(Etheree)

 



Dews
shimmer
as sunbeams
sprinkle warmth on
sleepy canvas of
tangerine horizon;
blinking, yawning milieu wakes,
feathers flutter higher, chirping
a song of life, dancing to the tune
that embraces another beautiful morn.





*Wrote it a long time back - 2009/4/22

**The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.


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30 comments:

  1. super neat!

    glad to see u in.
    ;)

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  2. Happy Thursday!

    Thanks for sharing such a talented poem with us...

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  3. what a creative piece I really enjoyed it and I love all the colors of your blog it made me happy that I stopped by!!!

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  4. Beautiful scenery, wish time can stop at this very moment!=D

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  5. eeeeeeeeeee.........naya form :D
    ekdum massttt :D
    main bhi try karoongiii :D

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  6. A fine ode to nature, in all its beauty. The picture sets a grand stage, and the poem follows through, with beauty and with poise. Gorgeously done.

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  7. What beautiful portrayal of a lovely morning.. so refreshing..
    Your words out to be framed and put up on the wall to read the 1st thing in the morning..

    Very refreshing

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  8. crisp lines that stay true to the poem and image.. lovely morning for sure! :D

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  9. I can feel that sunrise coming up and I am enveloped in those beautiful colors! This is a wonderful poetry form one I have never tried and now I think I have to. thank you for sharing and explaining it, it looks like a great challenge!

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  10. Happy Thursday, Dear.
    Return favor to poets who are here.

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  11. I always love to learn different forms...this one I will try for sure. The piece is very good, I enjoyed the flow, and the feel of the world waking is such a good feeling. Well done.

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  12. I love this form, and you have done such a great job with it in this poem. I could almost see the sunrise and hear the birds.

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  13. ah!! a lovely poem :)

    enjoyed it a lot :D

    sweet write :)

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  14. I love the etheree form and yours is a beauty!

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  15. Cool form and your poem makes me look forward to embracing a new day :)

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  16. such a vivid piece about mornings. which i see almost every day. well done

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  17. let me know after you are done 18 poets visiting...
    Happy Saturday!

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  18. Joyful poem; I am eager to try my own Etheree; my poet friend blogginwithamanda.com told me about your site and the form and I am glad she did!

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  19. I love the optimism conveyed in your poem. Your picture is lovely as well.

    http://angelacohan321.wordpress.com

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  20. Hello, friend, how are you?

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    No specific rules, simply linking in 1 to 3 poems, it could be an old poem, let us read and comment for you. Feel free tasting other poetry treats, all enjoyable experience…

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  22. Sweet and beautiful poem: so joyous! The "tangerine horizon" struck me just right. :-)

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  23. thank you everyone for the wonderful compliments :)

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  24. You brought some visions to life in this poem.
    Great job

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    Hello, friend:

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    Thanks in advance.
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