Monday, September 27, 2010

::Waves of Memories::


Waves
crashing
against the
silver shoreline,
echoing memories of yesterdays.

Gently trickles down a solitary
tear of unborn
dream, sleeping
in my
eyes.

Picture clicked today at Beach.

  

**A tetractys is a complete thought written in 20 syllables.1st line 1 syllable, 2nd line 2, 3rd line 3, 4th line 4, 5th line 10 .

A tetractys can also be inverted for a 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 count, and also given the snowflake form – two verses of complete thought, one in the 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 form, followed by the 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 form.

16 comments:

  1. ah super poem Raj, loved the imagery and the graphic, thanks for visiting me xx

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  2. Great poem.
    interesting form too.
    i might have a go

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  3. great form and poem...should try it!

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  4. lovely, the rhythm and shape of the poem suit the content. :)

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  5. loved the poem and the pic to.....
    thanks for your visit ...
    belated daughter's day wishes to you too.......

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  6. Oh I need to try this one! Beautiful imagry I feel the salt hitting my face!

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  7. so delicate and beautiful..
    BTW, most of us if not all are suffering in the same ORDER- (refer your bio) LOLsss

    Loads of Love
    xox

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  8. Wonderful poem Raj, great imagery and the graphic suits so well, thanks for linking with Potluck my friend xxx

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  9. simply fabulous. your poetic skill is enchanting.

    trisha

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  10. Very well done.. I enjoyed the picture of your verse...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  11. http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-natures-elements-air.html
    Greetings!
    It is Monday again, I sincerely invite you to join us for a Monday Poetry Potluck party, bring in 1 to 3 poem treats to share via the link on the top! You could use an old poem.

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