Friday, October 29, 2010

::As the clouds pass by - Revised::



As the clouds pass by
thousand thoughts fly,
painting silver memories,

of unstated words and
passion suppressed,
behind the walls of
whitewashed dreams,

Whispering a secret,
caressing my soul again
the clouds pass by.

-Time can heal life-

** Revised version of - As the clouds pass by

Photo- clicked at Chennai - from my office using my cell phone



11 comments:

  1. very nice one and heart touching.excellent.

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  2. cloudy clouds
    and
    touchy poem..

    keep `em coming..

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  4. This is great.
    i like the 4 liner in the middle and that photo. WOW

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  5. gorgeous pic. beautiful poem.

    trisha
    mydomainpvt.wordpress.com

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  6. Indeed Time heals everything .. well so they say .. I got to get there though.. :)

    good postive one the pic is great :)

    Bikram's Blog

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  7. Rajlakshmi: :) :) :) Good. From the negative to the positive. Lovely!

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  8. Fine poem. Thanks for linking the original too. You crafted the lines very nicely. Happy Halloween!

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  9. Beautiful picture and beautiful words

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  10. I really liked this one Rajalakshmi. Keep writing and enthralling us with such lovely verses.

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  11. Such a gentle and sweet poem. I enjoyed it a lot.

    I see you are posting by phone. How adventurous. I haven't tried that yet. Good for you! :-)

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