Tuesday, October 26, 2010

::While my guitar gently weeps::



Memories of yesterdays,
whisper softly,
tingling like a
waft of familiar fragrance
lost in timeless space.

The songs we composed
for long winding road
remained unsung,
-smeared -
on lifeless paper.

The solitary night
stitches notes from
-scattered rhymes-
playing the missing song.

While my guitar gently weeps.

* wrote the poem for a title contest, the title is from one of Beatles songs.
* image courtesy - Google




15 comments:

  1. if i knew how to play guitar ..
    i wud say the same...my guitar gently weeps...

    beautiful..

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  2. this is so nice.. you are gifted really!

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  3. very talented writing.
    keep it up.

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  4. playing the missing song ...
    nicely done Cheers!!!
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  5. hmmm sumhow i got reminded of "killing me softly..."

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  6. This most most certainly worthy of a song and surly it will be a bestseller!! Well done my friend xx

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  7. Lovely, thanks for linking.

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  8. nice one .. memories , past yeah offcourse the guitar weeps

    thats why they say

    Jo dhun SAAZ se nikli woh sab ne Suni
    Jo Saaz pe Guzri woh kissi ne na
    Suni :)


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  9. ah, Raji, this was beautiful.. memories woven together so well :D

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  10. So soft...so sad, too. You crafted a beautiful piece from the title.

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  11. Beautiful. Lost memories and tears go hand-in-hand, don't they?

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  12. Wow..Do you play guitar!!! I love to hear you play..:)

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  13. You have a gift for such gentle pieces. Thanks for posting them and sharing with us.

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