Sunday, November 14, 2010

22 comments:

  1. How do u do that??? It's invincible!! Do you just think of a shape and start writing? The shape makes sense, the poetry makes sense, its awesome! ~Punam

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  2. Amazing talent! That is just beautiful--words and form. Makes me want to dance or fly.

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  3. I think you are really talented!! How do you do it!! I loved reading this just as much as I love reading all your other poems :) And I like the theme of this poem :) :)

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  4. you're the best at this.. :D loved the shape and the words..!

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  5. Very interesting and appriciable ---poetry and shape you given it.
    Best wishes.
    Hemant

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  6. quite lovely I see you make this and post as a photo? what program do you use? it is a shame blogging dashboards don't give more control over the post text. You have a wonderful talent for this!

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  7. Wow-- gives a while new meaning to poetic form-- love it!

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  8. ah, wow, love it! - the shape, the sentiments expressed, and the perfect marriage between the two. Well done!

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  9. Dear Rajlakshmi
    Its beautiful the image that you have created with words as well as the picture that you have painted. Very interesting...you dance with wings unclipped ofcourse...
    Thanks for sharing your amazing talent...


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  10. incredible presentation and word flow!

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  11. This was so beautiful. The unclipped wings and the spirit soaring unimpeded...just beautiful!

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  12. Lovely shape matching with the absolutely beautiful words!!! Freedom is indeed the name of the game...

    Well, you put your lazy Saturday to good use ;-)
    Very well written, Raji!!!!

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  13. fantastic! so very creative. i have always wanted to do something like this. great work!

    take care ~700

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  14. Wow Raji, that is one amazing thing i have seen today! what a talent...brilliant!

    I am going to try this...thanks for the inspiration :)

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  15. your talent is outstanding. how can you manage these poems?

    wonderful words raj. just loved the meaning of the poem.

    trisha
    mydomainpvt.wordpress.com

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  16. Nice job - it's like a pictograph!

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  17. this is breath taking, Raji...
    love the shape..
    your creativity is infinite.
    Glad to see you share with potluck poetry.

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  18. WOW! Poetry and art all in one! I LOVE IT!!! simply beautiful!

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  19. week 11 potluck awards/treats 4 u

    Thanks for the beautiful contribution to week 11, hope to see you next Monday!
    Happy Thursday!
    Happy Thanksgiving Holiday if you celebrate!

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