Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Yester-Years


Dusky horizon,
recalls Youthful yester years,
A Time so yonder,

yeaning yanky days,
of yellow petals and yacht,
gentle waves of time.

Writtem for the Z-A in 26 Days Challenge at I Rhyme Without Reason

10 comments:

  1. Hi!
    Just happened to stumble upon your blog and went through even some of your previous poems - I think you are a wonderful poet :)
    Lovely lines :D :D
    Do keep writing :) I will definitely visit again!!

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  2. nostalgic take, Raji :) we all remember those yester years for sure.. and you involved so many Y words in these haikus..

    I don't think it, I know you are a wonderful poet :)

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  3. Amazing alliteration without being forced. Good poem.
    Victoria
    http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/02/leos-z-to-a-challenge-yesterday-you/

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  4. A poetic memoir. The alliteration and use of yellow ads much to the sense of looking back. Well done! :-) Thank you!

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  5. "smiles of a summer night" - just a soft and beautiful description.

    I can see it all - the violet shadows, the moss, the maples...lovely!

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  6. Well written.. nice Haikus..these!

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  7. Great piece for the Y. Amazing use of the words! Keep up the good work!

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  8. I really like your style how your each form of poetry has nature's reference. There are so many associations yet simple lines. Very pretty and neat way of writing

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