Tuesday, December 14, 2010

::Dreamless::



In the wake of long shadows
rose the moon, beside shreds of
-dreamless stars-

tracing back a frail trail
lost in obscurity -
-unfathomable-

Dreams, suspended among,
dense unceasing thoughts
-dethroned-
 

** When dreams are lost in reality**

14 comments:

  1. There was something very soulful and melancholic about this one, Raji.. Felt it!!
    Just too beautiful a poem for words!!

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  2. beautiful.. splendid..


    "dense unceasing thoughts"

    nice work..keep `em coming!

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  3. A 'dethroned' dream - what a haunting image that is.

    Beautiful and melancholy...

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  4. There's a timelessness to this; everything tracing its frail trail.

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  5. Very soulful... Beautiful use of words...

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  6. Has the sense of a soul wending its way through eternity.

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  7. This is fabulous,
    love your creativity,

    the imagery is breath taking...

    A++

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  8. Haunting, evocative soulful journey -- lost within the dream of never fully realized its own unfathomable self. Beautiful,,,

    joanny

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  9. fabulous raj, as always, a delight to the eyes and mind.

    trisha
    mydomainpvt.wordpress.com

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  10. End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! xxx

    keep up the excellence,

    link a poem to our potluck tomorrow, give us the cheers to continue...

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  11. Everyone deserves a dream. Hope you get yours soon. :)

    Nice lines. :)

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