Friday, February 11, 2011

13 comments:

  1. walk away ..nicely done...good writing...

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  2. very innovatv pice of writing, a complete diffrent style

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  3. your shape poetries always amaze me raj.

    how can you manage them so perfectly?

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  4. i like the shape of the person walking away...this poem just hits home for me..

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  5. impressed again,
    well done..

    Happy Valentine's Day.

    A++

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  6. Wow, this is amazing. Shape poetry truly has its distinct beauty/

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  7. Love this! I am impressed - I have tried to do a couple of shape poems in my life, and they didn't turn out very well. But you seem to be a master at the form! Well done! :)

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  8. Dear Rajalakshmi

    Its so beautifully written, specially the words that I could relate to were...
    'sealing forever the world she did not belong to' ... beautiful.
    Thanks for sharing..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html

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  9. hey rajalaxshmi,I like your artwork in poetry.How do you do it?like to know the trick...I enjoyed it!

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  10. you have such a fantastic good minded.....nice blog

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