Wednesday, June 29, 2011

::Draped in Life::






Draped in silver shimmers,
unceasingly it captures reflection
cascading down a tangerine sky,


and the smiling sunbeams 
tingle a yawning serenity,
bursting with Life.


Submitting for Watery Wednesday

13 comments:

  1. Soft reflective piece... well penned.

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  2. ah, your verse is full of life as well...lovely

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  3. How the sun helps renew us with a burst of life, you captured it great.

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  4. i just love the yawning serenity...this is so relaxed

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  5. I love how serenity mixes with a bust of color
    delightful

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  6. My my, girl!! I almost drowned in this luscious and beautifully worded picture you've painted here...
    *sigh*

    Lovely!!

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  7. What a beautiful waterscape! :) along with your poetry, it just comes to life! Loved it Raji.

    A Poetic World - My Potluck Post

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  8. I enjoyed this free verse and loved the softness that is permeating in the imagery that you have created here... I would love to be here and soak in the yawning life that is around there...

    Thanks for joining in the Poetry Potluck WK 43 which I am hosting for the first time… hope you have liked it too…. and wish to see you again…

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/07/whispers-cuckoos-song-and-smell-of-love.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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  9. Beautiful serenity.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Mine's here:
    http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/07/stars-have-winked-at-you.html

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