Friday, June 10, 2011

[Kwansaba]::Misty Morning::


Kissed by a wisp of gentle breeze
spring flowers swoon in an elegant ballet,
echoes, the rhythm of a silent stream
flowing against pebbles, copper and white,
a warm sunlit charm wraps winter shivers,
as an amber glow fills misty milieu ,
unfolds new morn, yawning ‘neath hopeful sky.






The Kwansaba is a non-rhyming form that consists of seven lines of seven words per line and each word can not include more than seven letters unless it's a proper noun. It's based on Kwanzaa, the African American holiday that celebrates seven principles


10 comments:

  1. Gorgeous reflections and delightful words! Hope you have a lovely weekend!

    Sylvia

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  2. Extraodinary water shot... The colors are so bright... This must be a marvelous place to meditate.

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  3. Beautiful image and poem, makes me want to be right there.

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  4. liked the concept of "Kwansaba " and also ur poem ...

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  5. Beautiful "misty morning". I'm so impressed with your poem--lovely. I will try one sometime. Your origami butterfly is absolutely beautiful--very nice work. What a nice blog you have--I'll come back. Mickie :)

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  6. fantastic poem. very challenging style. thanks for teaching.

    :)

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