Thursday, June 2, 2011

[Palindrome]::Suspended::




Celestial romance and
glorious dawns,
world hidden over veil,
sinusoidal starry swirls,
mysteries , known - unknown, 
between lies time, beyond reach,
myriad colors in space, 
foggy past through captured reflections,
answers lay
~Suspended~
Lay answers
reflections captured through past, foggy
space in colors myriad,
Reach beyond time lies between
unknown-known mysteries,
swirls starry sinusoidal,
Veil over hidden world,
dawns glorious
And romance celestial



Palindrome Poetry
Also Known as Mirrored Poetry

A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads same forward and backward
It stems from the Greek word palindromos: palin, meaning again, and 
dromos, meaning a running. Combining the two together, the Greek meaning gives us, running
back again

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27 comments:

  1. So many words to explain one thing...

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  2. Nice job! I really enjoyed how the lines swirled you around and then let you linger for a moment before swirling you back around again.

    Good word choice, and the rhythm devices were a great match to subject matter.

    I NEED to try this form, it seems very challenging.

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  3. Clever device and good descriptive poetry well done!

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  4. Did not formally learn poetry..now learning from you. Good job

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  5. I wonder how you mange to execute forms to perfection, Raji :) I think the last three lines, the reverse of the first, make the best reading..! Loved it.

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  6. You've created a kind of maze with your words... Thought provoking and mysterious. Awesome work!

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  7. Great poem, I love the form totally , just amazing to say :P

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  8. Wow! Nicely done :) And how you reflected upon the Universe.. our existence.. and yet a palindrome.


    Puplumages is Purvi :)
    I am from ~
    http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/05/27/laments-on-the-loss-of-love/

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  9. Very nicely done. Interesting form. I think I may give it a whirl myself one of these days. I enjoyed it very much. Unique. Creative. Thank you:)

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  10. your writing skill is definitely outstanding.

    Glad you took the new form to write and share.
    well done,

    Happy Rally.

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  11. did not know this form of poetry and am in awe by the way you created it.

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  12. This is amazing you've have really mastered this form! I can't even imagine how you did this. I love the sense of the unknown in this poem

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  13. This is just absolutely amazing. I have never tried this form and actually, this is the first time I have ever come across a poem of this structure and its safe to say that I'm absolutely flabbergasted. This is pure genius.And such swirls of color and solid, almost tangible imagery.This is just lovely!

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  14. Expressive...
    Skillful and innovative...

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  15. Wow! Thats brilliant!
    Enjoyed the palindrome romance!

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  16. I had no idea someone could do that, and do it so well.

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  17. I would agree. words swirling around you as your hands are reaching out :)

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  18. "unknown-known mysteries" - I love that!

    This was so thoughtful and beautiful!

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  19. Oh this is wonderful! All the same words, but go in another direction and they take on such a different meaning! Love the lesson in this, thank you :)

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  20. beautiful poetry,
    Thanks for sharing with potluck.

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  21. So creative! Always admire your ideas. A PALINDROME poem seems so tough but you have made this one a pleasure to read.

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  22. Very creative word flow! The poem evokes the sense of allowing oneself to feel the depth of the suspension.
    Really nice!

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  23. I love it very creative and ambitiouw

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  24. just brilliant raj. simply brilliant.

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