Thursday, June 16, 2011

17 comments:

  1. Interesting piece, very clever, meany birds icky. anyway i like the idea of shape poetry though it isnt something I personally do, i find it unique and worth doing though, more power to ya do what you do and i look forward to seeing you again in future rallies

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  2. Oh, that is cool. Love it. : )

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  3. loved the way you present it :)

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  4. oh. btw the poem is good too.

    have a nice day !

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  5. Oh this is very cute!! Love the presentation,love the poem!

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  6. very clever dear xx bravo...

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  7. this one is splendid raj! what a piece of art and literature :)

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  8. Lovely, both image and the prose used. Thanks for sharing. :)

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  9. This is very clever and cute! I love your creativity =)

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  10. Just so cool on so many levels-- great job! I especially like the line "we save our golden eggs" -- d.straight we do!

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  11. the colors and shape are perfectly matched, powerful stuff.

    love your talent.

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  12. I was inspired by your verse to write a pantoum-- thanks! It's here:
    http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/2011/06/23/week-141-we%E2%80%99ll-save-our-golden-eggs/

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