Summer bloom,
soaked in grey moonlit gloom,
among sighs of eerie copper sky.
Slowly rises dawn, sweeping off darkness thereby,
splashing infectious smiles weaving purple reply,
dew drops await in lingering veil,
whispering in detail,
nightly tale.
Photo clicked from my Apartment.
**Trois-par-Huit (Three-by-Eight or Octa-Tri for short), a poem containing three stanzas of 3, 3 and 2 lines OR 3, 2 and 3 lines: 8 lines total with a syllable count of 3, 6, 9, 12, 12, 9, 6, 3. The rhyming pattern is AAB BBC CC where the last line is the title of the poem and summarizes the meaning of the poem. *Note: These poems are to appear center aligned.
Submitting for Thursday Poet's Rally
Submitting for Thursday Poet's Rally
So vivid and colorful and yet so well written. Your words flow and your images come to live thanks for sharing
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love it,
ReplyDeletethe imagery is beautiful.
Vivid and flowing. A very nice reading experience. Well done!
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Very well done!
ReplyDeleteNice imagery. Here's mine:
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How do you know so much about poems? I never look at poems technically. I think I should from now on. :)
ReplyDeleteReally nice one. :)
A perfect poem for that photo! Just lovely--I enjoyed it very much.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautifully done and the photo is so lovely!
ReplyDeleteGreat picture poetry work Impressive and enjoyable
ReplyDeletefabulous poem, i am enjoying this form a lot. thanks for teaching it. :)
ReplyDeletevery nice words and lovely photographic image
ReplyDeleteGreat use of imagery and mood.
ReplyDeleteIt is a color yet at time melancholy
feel to it.
Good work.
This is what is called as short and sweet i guess.
ReplyDeleteLovely imaginary:)
http://sandhyaguptamp.blogspot.com/2011/09/hallucination-2.html
love this.
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Hello.
ReplyDeleteWhat a view!
Nicely penned.
Thanks for sharing.
Your Song Of Love
lovely view.
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Happy Rally.
Thanks a ton for the beautiful entry and instant participation.
I like it when the sensory writing is so clear and detail-perfect that I can taste the dew on my tongue.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
It's already been said, but truly beautiful imagery! Interesting form as well!
ReplyDeletei loved both, the pic as well as the poem..its so meaningful and nice :)
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