Friday, September 23, 2011

::Nightly Tale::

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Summer bloom,
soaked in grey moonlit gloom,
among sighs of eerie copper sky.

Slowly rises dawn, sweeping off darkness thereby,
splashing infectious smiles weaving purple reply,

dew drops await in lingering veil,
whispering in detail,
nightly tale.


Photo clicked from my Apartment.



**Trois-par-Huit (Three-by-Eight or Octa-Tri for short), a poem containing three stanzas of 3, 3 and 2 lines OR 3, 2 and 3 lines: 8 lines total with a syllable count of 3, 6, 9, 12, 12, 9, 6, 3. The rhyming pattern is AAB BBC CC where the last line is the title of the poem and summarizes the meaning of the poem. *Note: These poems are to appear center aligned.


Submitting for Thursday Poet's Rally

19 comments:

  1. Ann LeFloreSeptember 23, 2011 at 2:53 AM

    So vivid and colorful and yet so well written. Your words flow and your images come to live thanks for sharing
    http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/09/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week_21.html

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  2. The Orange TreeSeptember 23, 2011 at 3:29 AM

    love it,

    the imagery is beautiful.

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  3. Marbles in My PocketSeptember 23, 2011 at 4:43 AM

    Vivid and flowing. A very nice reading experience. Well done!

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2011 at 5:50 AM

    Very well done!

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  5. Christopher RaleySeptember 23, 2011 at 3:17 PM

    Nice imagery. Here's mine:
    http://tappingthewall.wordpress.com/2011/09/22/stars/

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2011 at 5:03 PM

    How do you know so much about poems? I never look at poems technically. I think I should from now on. :)

    Really nice one. :)

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2011 at 5:04 AM

    A perfect poem for that photo! Just lovely--I enjoyed it very much.

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  8. Old RavenSeptember 24, 2011 at 4:48 PM

    This is beautifully done and the photo is so lovely!

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  9. anjum artwriterSeptember 25, 2011 at 2:01 AM

    Great picture poetry work Impressive and enjoyable

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  10. sharmishthaSeptember 25, 2011 at 2:33 AM

    fabulous poem, i am enjoying this form a lot. thanks for teaching it. :)

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  11. Jacqui Binford-BellSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:17 PM

    very nice words and lovely photographic image

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  12. Nefarious XSeptember 26, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    Great use of imagery and mood.
    It is a color yet at time melancholy
    feel to it.

    Good work.

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  13. sayaSeptember 26, 2011 at 11:27 PM

    This is what is called as short and sweet i guess.
    Lovely imaginary:)

    http://sandhyaguptamp.blogspot.com/2011/09/hallucination-2.html

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  14. The Cello StringsSeptember 27, 2011 at 6:09 AM

    love this.

    thanks for the support.

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  15. AndySeptember 30, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    Hello.
    What a view!

    Nicely penned.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Your Song Of Love

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  16. The Poetry PalaceOctober 1, 2011 at 4:16 AM

    lovely view.

    please comment to let us know after you are done returning favors and making a minimum 18 comments,

    Happy Rally.
    Thanks a ton for the beautiful entry and instant participation.

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  17. AynsleyOctober 1, 2011 at 12:41 PM

    I like it when the sensory writing is so clear and detail-perfect that I can taste the dew on my tongue.
    Well done.

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  18. AnonymousOctober 2, 2011 at 6:30 AM

    It's already been said, but truly beautiful imagery! Interesting form as well!

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  19. A SOctober 9, 2011 at 6:19 PM

    i loved both, the pic as well as the poem..its so meaningful and nice :)

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