Friday, September 23, 2011

::Nightly Tale::

Summer bloom,
soaked in grey moonlit gloom,
among sighs of eerie copper sky.

Slowly rises dawn, sweeping off darkness thereby,
splashing infectious smiles weaving purple reply,

dew drops await in lingering veil,
whispering in detail,
nightly tale.

Photo clicked from my Apartment.

**Trois-par-Huit (Three-by-Eight or Octa-Tri for short), a poem containing three stanzas of 3, 3 and 2 lines OR 3, 2 and 3 lines: 8 lines total with a syllable count of 3, 6, 9, 12, 12, 9, 6, 3. The rhyming pattern is AAB BBC CC where the last line is the title of the poem and summarizes the meaning of the poem. *Note: These poems are to appear center aligned.

Submitting for Thursday Poet's Rally


  1. So vivid and colorful and yet so well written. Your words flow and your images come to live thanks for sharing

  2. Vivid and flowing. A very nice reading experience. Well done!

  3. Nice imagery. Here's mine:

  4. How do you know so much about poems? I never look at poems technically. I think I should from now on. :)

    Really nice one. :)

  5. A perfect poem for that photo! Just lovely--I enjoyed it very much.

  6. This is beautifully done and the photo is so lovely!

  7. Great picture poetry work Impressive and enjoyable

  8. fabulous poem, i am enjoying this form a lot. thanks for teaching it. :)

  9. very nice words and lovely photographic image

  10. Great use of imagery and mood.
    It is a color yet at time melancholy
    feel to it.

    Good work.

  11. This is what is called as short and sweet i guess.
    Lovely imaginary:)

  12. Hello.
    What a view!

    Nicely penned.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Your Song Of Love

  13. lovely view.

    please comment to let us know after you are done returning favors and making a minimum 18 comments,

    Happy Rally.
    Thanks a ton for the beautiful entry and instant participation.

  14. I like it when the sensory writing is so clear and detail-perfect that I can taste the dew on my tongue.
    Well done.

  15. It's already been said, but truly beautiful imagery! Interesting form as well!

  16. i loved both, the pic as well as the poem..its so meaningful and nice :)


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