Wednesday, December 28, 2011

::Memories::


Delightfully crafted,
unwinding in layers
of subconscious
-Memories-
And then,
Brutally snatched,
lost in hollow,
of daunting past.

Blank.

-Memories-
A Jig saw puzzle,
though missing 
pieces few , 
but Brother, 
don't you worry 
we can always
paint some new.


** Dedicated to a loved one, who lost a part of his memory.



I was awarded Perfect Poet at Thursday Rally Week 58 - Thank you so much :D   I would like to nominate - Rachana

12 comments:

  1. Losing memory can be very tough on anyone. Well written poetry and congratulations for being the perfect poet.

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  2. nice..love the idea of painting new memories or better...living new memories..smiles

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  3. nice...we can always paint anew...a fresh start and sometimes that is better than the memories...

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  4. The anchor 'Blank' was perfect in the middle. A great connection there... yes... we can always live our life in now and burst forth in color every day...

    thanks for sharing... Happy New Year My friend. May the year bring you Happiness, Peace, love and prosperity.

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/12/whisper-no-one-is-there-in-living-haiku.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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  5. Well a New Year is coming ... time to make new memories :)

    Namaste

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  6. Beautiful message to your brother! Nicely written!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/another-will-be-born/

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  7. Very nice..last line is the best..we can always paint some new

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  8. You speak truly both of loss and compensation. That's what friends are for!

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  9. what would we do without hope? quite a hopeful piece! enjoy the rally!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/souls-paradise/

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  10. Starting anew is a gift indeed.

    JP

    http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/12/30/my-heart-sings/

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  11. Happy ne wyear :)

    enjoyed it :)

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  12. loss of memory is a big loss, and yes you can always create new ones. lovely way of looking at it raj.

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