Tuesday, January 10, 2012

December Rain


In long torrential strokes, 
striking the window sill,

tip tap against the wall,
screaming down the street.

sudden December rain,
stormed the city,
wheezing past the greens,
rising from the sea.



** Thane cyclone




8 comments:

  1. Beautiful write! Very vivid!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/01/08/billy-bully-bull/

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  2. that is happening here in january. an exceptional downpour.

    beautiful poem raj

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  3. sounds like quite the storm...we are in the midst of one now...

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  4. Sydden and sad cyclone indeed :(
    nature is stronger
    DEEPAK

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  5. Very nice write!

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/01/10/the-sun-came-up-again-4/

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  6. The "wheezing" is wonderful -- precise and surprising at the same time!

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