Thursday, January 26, 2012

::Just can't do without you::

The poem is a result of conference chat with my hopelessly crazy friends. The first para was given by a friend and he asked me to write a song (not a poem) in simple language.

There are a few, but they aren't like you..
I can do without me, but not without you!
love is priceless, cannot be bought for a cost..
hold on to it, before its all lost

hand in hand, let us sail to a place,
where sun drowns in an orange haze,
Let us lie beneath a moonlit night,
Our dreams dancing side by side

I trace my lifeline etched on your palm,
while you look at me, innocently calm,
smiling broadly, yeah it's true
There are a few, but they aren't like you

stealing glances by the shore,
diving into the ocean's floor,
through your eyes I would love to view,
my life can go on but not without you!


  1. this has a nice rhythm to it...and some warm and fanciful imagery as well...nice...

  2. oh nice...what a warm and happy love song...enjoyed it

  3. how charming is that?! precious! :)

  4. I enjoyed reading that! Thanks.

  5. This is profound and beautiful.

    love the rhyming.

  6. :I trace my lifeline etched on your palm:

    Love it :D

  7. Love and enchantment bring such lovely melodies and words, doesn't it! :)

  8. This is beautiful and powefol... Vet assertive and full of passion!

    Great post!

  9. that is what true love is made of. :)


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