Tuesday, March 11, 2014

Cobwebbed Memories

Cobwebbed memories
slowly peel off from old walls
long since you had left

the couch witnessed
your blatant betrayal, tear-
stained curtains wiped pain

Like that broken lamp
I hung there hoping that you
Would fix it one day.

Haikus for magpie tales photo prompt


14 comments:

  1. that they did not should tell you enough...smiles..
    it is time to make new memories...

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    1. yup sometimes making new memories is a better way out. Thank you for writing in

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  2. Nicely done.....thanks for sharing

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  3. " the couch witnessed
    your blatant betrayal"

    So much in a few words... Did the cough witnessed the betrayal physically? The pain. Will anyone ever fix the lamp... so much.

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    1. indeed the pain ... of betrayal is hard to recover from... thank you so much for writing in :)

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  4. Well written and great to read.
    Yvonne.

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  5. Brilliantly penned haikus. I particularly liked the couch becoming a witness!

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    1. thank you so much for writing in. Glad you liked that line :)

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    1. indeed... many a secrets lay hidden there. Thank you so much for visiting:)

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