Monday, April 21, 2014

Rictameter - Your Eyes



Your eyes, 
Bedazzle me, 
That mischievous twinkle 
Makes me envisage unknown dreams, 
Will you let our forever build in time? 
Will our fingers ever entwine? 
Awaiting an answer 
Trembles, flutters, 
my heart.


Rictameter is a scheme similar to Cinquain. Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2, 4, 6, 8, 10 Then down again, 8, 6, 4, 2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with.  

::Don't Miss out on previous poetry types::
Day 1 - A for Acrostic                                        
Day 2 - B for Blitz   
Day 3 - C for CinqTroisDecaLaRhyme                    


Day 4 - D For Diamente  
Day 5 - E for Essence                                       
Day 6 - F for Florette 
Day 7 - G for Ghazal 
Day 8 - H for Haiku 
Day 9 - I for Inverted Refrain  
Day 10 - J for Joseph Star
Day 11 - K for Kyrielle 
Day 12 - L for Lanturne
Day 13 - M for Minute Poetry
Day 14 - N  for Nove Otto
Day 15 - O for Octelle
Day 16 - P for Palindrome
Day 17 - Q for Quatrain


10 comments:

  1. Very artistic both the poem and patttern

    PhenoMenon
    http://throodalookingglass.com/2014/04/risotto/

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  2. I'm learning so much here - love the rictameter.
    When this A-Z is over I'm going to catch up on your other posts.

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  3. Love your rictameter, Such a sweet poem.

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  4. The flutter and fantasy of young love- how eloquently captured <3

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  5. wow
    Good to learn so many kinds of poems. This one is so bful
    Dropping by from A to z and now following ur blog
    good luck
    http://afshan-shaik.blogspot.in/

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  6. That's really quite a nice poem. I never knew much about poetry, I just know I like the "feel" of things or not. And I LOVE the feeling with this one. Nicely done.

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  7. Wow!!! Seriously Wow!!! Start to end I didn't even blink an eye and I have read it like 5 times already!

    ~S(t)ri
    Participant|AtoZ Challenge 2014
    Smile, it makes (y)our day!

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  8. How beautiful and very sweet

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  9. What a beautiful love poem! Gentle, sweet and curious :)

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