Tuesday, February 10, 2015

Clamour

In the random clamour of colors 
and dreams unspoken,
I shed inhibitions.
The angels have long stopped,
watching over me, listlessly flying, 
mocking too, maybe!
Meanwhile I climb back,
the spiraling staircase,
trading my wings, for a step or two.


Clamou

14 comments:

  1. Ooooohhh!!! Awesome prompt and a brilliant poetry!!! Damn I need to dust my blog and start writing too!! 🙈 Lemme try this prompt!

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  2. Great poem and so much can be read into this poem of an angel wanting to feel human again or any interpretation-great use of the word

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  3. Like a mermaid trying to escape the sea !

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  4. Ah such a rebel to stop using their wings! ;) <3

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  5. The angels may finally come to look over her! :D

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  6. wow...I have dabbed in poems but no I can't write as intensely as you..very nice

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  7. "clamour of colors"- superb alliteration. I hear and see your image simultaneously.
    Lovely poem!

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  8. Lovely composition. You do have a way with words.

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  9. Lovely composition. You do have a way with words.

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