Thursday, July 23, 2015

Unreachable!!

Clutching a meagre meal
she stared, 
at the pulsating blinding lights and
T
A
L
L
winding staircase, unreachable.

Between bejewelled roof and
mosaic floor, lay dreams,
cosmic miles A P A R T.

She wondered, if her happiness too
resided on one of the floors.
Perhaps!

**********************

Wiping the last remnant 
of Ruby coloured lipstick,
she longingly gazed
at the revolving glass door,
from a floor too 
H
I
G

Maybe, like that rag-tag girl,
she too could walk out,
escaping the songs of the day,
and 
S   R   A    S
  C    E   M
induced nights.

********************

For a moment their eyes met,
each wishing to be the other.








20 comments:

  1. Loved the way you have written this. Should try it sometime :)

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    1. oh sure... I would love to read it too... thank you :)

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  2. Wow, this is new! Loved how you penned down! :)

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  3. Interesting read and well done.

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  4. Something to think about. Loved it :)

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  5. This is very well done. I love the way you wrote it and the feelings it brings out. Love the ending

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  6. Ooh...love the words and definitely the style. Is it a particular form?

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    1. thank you... not that I know of... it's just a style I saw while reading poetry in a site. Loved the way it expresses visually.

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  7. Creative presentation! Lovely :)

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  8. Beautifully worded! This is a new poetry style I've seen, what is it called?

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    1. don't know if it's a poetry style, but have seen many writing like this :) thank you :)

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