Here's my Entry for Jingle's Thursday Poet's Rally week 19 ... I wrote this long time back :)
Dying Nation
Anguished, frustrated
Cowering Inside,
Trapped in cobweb
Nation's life.
Disentangle, escape
Tightening grip,
Handcuffed by
Society's whip.
Hypocrats, Scandals
Stymieing progress,
Repressed opinion
Honesty undressed.
Bomb-Blast, massacres
Breaking events,
Delighted vultures
Hunger content.
I would also like to accept the following poetry awards for participating in Week 18 ... thank you so much Jingle :)
The Most Intelligent Poet Award
The Most Open Minded Poet Award
The Most honest Poet award
I feel the power of your words.
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very powerful, provoking. One need only look around, read anewspaper, turn on the tv or radio. What is happening? And what can we do about it?
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I agree with Ji powerful indeed, your poetry is a marvel and I am lucky to have u as a friend xx
ReplyDeletethey have all said it & i agree, very powerful
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"Trapped in cobweb" & "Handcuffed by /
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Adorable! Amazing poetry Raj, and very touching
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a very honest and powerful piece.
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