Friday, July 23, 2010

::Running Back to you::

Running Back to You

Staring at the photos,
Memories flash by,
Crouched in a corner,
Silently - I cry.
A convoluted maze
of a life so blue,
Where to go now,
I have no clue.

'Friends' are so mean,
Wearing a smiling shroud,
Daddy's pampered girl,
Is lost in the crowd.
Home is too far,
Visits are only few,
Mom,Dad I feel like,
Running back to you.

** had written it way back in 2008 when I first went away from home...

Image: Google


  1. Rajlakshmi.. that is exactly how i felt just a month and half ago.. "Daddy's pampered girl,
    Is lost in the crowd."... I have run back into their loving arms to hide from the mean mean bad world.

  2. homesickness is beautifully painted.
    lovely sentiments,
    Glad to read you.

  3. Awww... the poem was really sweet although the situation, unpleasant.
    Homesickness sucks big time, esp. when other things aren't going your way either! I liked the way you put 'friends' (in quotes and all)-- well described indeed!
    Hope you are fine and gleeful now though..

    Happy Rallying!!!

  4. Very real, I love it! Thank you for sharing such a personal poem!

  5. A very sweet emotion in this poem...touching. Well done :)

    Tracy H

  6. the imagery in this raj was superb, well done xxx

  7. A very nice depiction of emotion and struggle.

  8. you know there are times i feel like running home as well...says a lot about the hearts that live there...nice write!

  9. Homesickness -- tender and sad, -- missing the loving support of the family and friends that were nurtured and tended like a beautiful garden while growing up --- there is that nostalgic feeling that sweeps over me at times.

    Lovely evocative feelings you created with this poem.
    from thursdays rally

    did two posts today one below is for jingles rally.

  10. well when i read that FB status of yurs i reckoned there will be a post sooon abt getting back ! ... so when are yu???

  11. A good description of homesickness and being away from home for the first time.

  12. Beautiful words :)
    Loved this touching piece of poetry :)
    I guess every girl can relate to this feeling one way or the other :)

    Keep up the wonderful work :)



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  14. exactly how i felt when i left home for college. i felt so lost and alone. great poem here!


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